Wednesday, December 28, 2011

writing assignment 3 : The mysterious tree!

Once upon a time there was a beautiful tree, and a very huge one that no person can climb. However, the legend says that if a man reached the top of this tree and toke a fruit for his lover, then both of them will live a happy life together. But the strange thing is that this legend didn’t work on our too young lovers, the story of their love started when they met in the kindergarten and become best friends.

In the first day, both were told to set together. They hated each other so much that even the teacher could not do anything about it, but both were very good students. Their friendship began when both were forced to do a school project, its when they began to understand each other. Our lovers were friends until the last day in high school, in that very day the young man toke the person that he loves to that mysterious tree. He climbed the tree then toke a fruit and gave it to his girl, in that special moment she knew that he was in love with her, and of course she told him that she loved him even more.

Finally, when both were ready to get marry, they told their parents about it. Both of their parents were really happy, but a surprising thing happened when they met in the hotel for the dinner. when the girl and her family walked through the door the girl was walking fast towards the boy and his family because she was excited, and the boy did the same thing too. But both of the parents stopped them and went back home as fast as they could, our poor lovers didn’t understand a single thing.

In the house, the two parents told the lovers that they are banned from seeing each other. The two young people didn’t understand the hatred between the two families, but this didn’t stop them from seeing each other. Unfortunately, the girl’s father sow them together and as a result of that he decided to move to other country. They packed their bags and toke the train, the poor girl was a heart broken. When the guy reached the station he realized that he missed the train, he was a heart broken. So he asked an old man where the train was heading, the old man was horrified. The young man was worried so he asked what is wrong, the old man said that the train that left a few minutes ago is moving on a broken railway, and they can’t do a single thing about it, because the brake was broken.

Without hesitation the young man through himself on the railway, because he can’t stand the idea that his lover was going to die.

After the train was saved, the big surprise was that the guy wasn’t harmed there wasn’t even a scratch on him O_O. The girl’s father was very grateful for what he did, so he changed his mind about the young man and fixed everything between him and the boy’s family. After few day they got married and lived happily ever after, so it seems that the fruit from that tree did work after all :D .

hope you liked it girls :D .


  1. woooow ^^ nice story Afeya .. =P happy ending

    =') I wish you read my story too

  2. A wonderful story :)

    I think in these days is difficult to find the specifications of this young man, possible only in dreams. Hhhhhh :)

    Thanks Afeya

  3. amoon :
    i sure will dear :) .`

    ghada :
    you are right :P, no problem :D .